Campaigner Challenge #2: Shattered Imago

Oscitate.

My imago of Wonder Mum is completely smashed. Does that mean seven years of bad luck like a broken mirror? I hope not!

I didn’t get the flash fiction piece I wrote for the Second Campaigner Challenge polished last night and scheduled for today because I went to a meeting with #1 beastie. He’s going to the Pali Institute in the spring on a three day school field trip. Cool stuff :)

That Man ran late getting home from work. We arrived late to the meeting thus received a higher number. And THAT made us some of the last to get out of the meeting. Synchronicity or synchronicity fail? Where’s Jung when you need him?

Dinner was at 8 o’clock last night…3 of the 4 beasties’ bedtimes. Parent fail. Sigh. I should have planned a crock pot meal.

Reading with #4 and #3 beasties last night fell into a lacuna.

Today I’m walking around in a miasma and #2 beastie just handed me a Student Council essay to proof :headdesk:

Oscitate.

At least, I got those tricky words in here with the mirror bonus. Can I bore you for another few words to make 200? Thanks. I think I’m done and #135 on the challenge list.

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116 Comments (+add yours?)

  1. Arlee Bird
    Sep 27, 2011 @ 08:42:20

    A sly approach and quite different from most entries. Way to go!

    Lee
    Tossing It Out

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  2. Liz Fichera
    Sep 27, 2011 @ 08:42:52

    Clever! I like the story with a dose of reality. :)

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  3. Richard Hughes
    Sep 27, 2011 @ 09:07:12

    Sometimes playing catch-up works magic. Good piece. I’m 117 if you want to check it out.

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  4. F.E. Sewell (@FESewell)
    Sep 27, 2011 @ 09:48:18

    I love the entries that are based on reality. So clever!

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  5. K.T. Hanna (@KTHanna)
    Sep 27, 2011 @ 10:02:42

    This is great. Sometimes I really feel like that too. Nice to see a different and still entertaining approach. Well done!

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  6. Claire Hennessy
    Sep 27, 2011 @ 10:30:36

    Very funny. Good way of getting those pesky words in somehow! Good luck with you beasties!

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  7. Susie Medwell
    Sep 27, 2011 @ 10:49:00

    Fun! Loved the way you got the words into this (I’m #20).

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  8. Ciara Knight
    Sep 27, 2011 @ 10:50:50

    I love the humor and uniqueness. Great job with the challenge, Raelyn. Off to vote for you. :)

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  9. Miho Li
    Sep 27, 2011 @ 11:06:27

    Ha! I loved this. Very clever and fun to read :D

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  10. Angela Brown
    Sep 27, 2011 @ 11:40:57

    I love it!!! And you made it an actual post, like a post post. hehehehehe!

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  11. katyupperman
    Sep 27, 2011 @ 12:04:42

    This is cute! I went the flash fiction route because, for the life of me, I could not compose a legit blog post using those crazy words!

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  12. David Powers KIng
    Sep 27, 2011 @ 13:15:44

    “Synchronicity or synchronicity fail?” = brilliant!

    Great job, Raelyn! :)

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  13. Sheri L. Swift
    Sep 27, 2011 @ 13:36:39

    Cute way to use the dreaded words! ; )

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  14. The Golden Eagle
    Sep 27, 2011 @ 15:54:03

    I like the non-fiction aspect to this entry! :)

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  15. Kerri
    Sep 27, 2011 @ 15:54:51

    Very unique, nicely done :) Good luck!

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  16. Jen
    Sep 27, 2011 @ 16:17:01

    I love the approach you’ve taken here! Very clever, and a great job at making those challenge words sound absolutely natural.
    Mine is #3.

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  17. Daina
    Sep 27, 2011 @ 16:43:56

    Quite an amusing read :) I like the way you incorporated it all into the blog post.

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  18. Sonia Lal
    Sep 27, 2011 @ 19:21:32

    Not boring at all! It’s pretty clever and at least the little beasties are cute huh?

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  19. tara tyler
    Sep 27, 2011 @ 19:54:59

    i enjoyed that! sounds like a typical day here =)

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  20. rddenton
    Sep 28, 2011 @ 12:40:37

    Too cute an entry! One that really captures how busy you are, and the understanding that, well, sometimes, we just don’t have the time to write exactly what we want! :) I think this was a clever little entry, and it was a pleasure reading it!

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  21. Carrie Butler
    Sep 28, 2011 @ 13:49:49

    Hah! Clever way to work those words in, Raelyn! ;)

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  22. Miranda Hardy
    Sep 28, 2011 @ 15:17:15

    This made me smile. Love those words. Good job getting them in there.

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  23. Kurt
    Sep 28, 2011 @ 15:38:30

    Sly is right! I’ve only seen one other that takes a similar approach. Nicely done.

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  24. Cheryl Sonnier (@CherylSonnier)
    Sep 28, 2011 @ 16:01:09

    Loved that! My favourite bit was ‘That Man’ with capitalisation and all. That made me laugh out loud. I also loved ‘headdesk’ – I use that a lot too so I could definitely identify. A refreshing entry. :)

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  25. Sher A Hart (@SherAHart)
    Sep 28, 2011 @ 18:16:34

    I really enjoyed this real life story. Very ingenious and funny too. Great entry. If you haven’t read mine yet, don’t forget to enter the chocolate contest while you’re there. I’m number 52, Imago Fly Away.

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  26. Angelina C. Hansen (@AngelinaCHansen)
    Sep 28, 2011 @ 18:21:10

    Clever!

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  27. Fairview
    Sep 28, 2011 @ 21:02:45

    Nice job fitting in all the words and still managing to describe your day.

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  28. Jennie B
    Sep 29, 2011 @ 07:22:02

    That is so cute! Sounds like my days…

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  29. Medeia Sharif
    Sep 29, 2011 @ 09:20:43

    Great job. I like how it’s reality-based. :)

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  30. Roger Eschbacher
    Sep 29, 2011 @ 09:52:08

    I’ve gotta go with “clever,” too. Good job!

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  31. Sandwiched Writer
    Sep 29, 2011 @ 09:55:34

    Ah, I really like what you did with this! Different! And thanks for stopping by my blog!

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  32. Catherine Johnson
    Sep 29, 2011 @ 11:27:44

    Very cute how you did this, nice.

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  33. Lorelei Bell
    Sep 29, 2011 @ 17:42:31

    Yep, this really flowed, good job!

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  34. Mel Corbett
    Sep 30, 2011 @ 06:26:23

    Ha! Very sneaky way to get those words in. And I’m glad you managed to get all the beasties corralled eventually. Those words were tough. I can see synchronicity in normal conversation the same way that coincidence or kismet might pop up. The others though… No idea… well Lacuna is close to Laguna which is a part of my city that thinks it’s its own town. I could almost say someone saying it wrong and saying that… though that’s not how I used it. Nothing else fits the normal every day speech.

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  35. Elizabeth Arroyo
    Sep 30, 2011 @ 16:07:47

    I smiled too. Thanks for the read.

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  36. Cherie Colyer
    Sep 30, 2011 @ 16:50:54

    I’m impressed! I couldn’t figure out a way to do a blog post with the words. You did it in a fun way and worked the words in flawlessly. :)

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  37. alberta ross
    Oct 01, 2011 @ 02:43:38

    very neat! – seamless and an everyday blog – amazingly good

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  38. Christy Farmer
    Oct 01, 2011 @ 04:19:29

    I really enjoyed this Raelyn:-)

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  39. Francesca Zappia
    Oct 01, 2011 @ 07:05:07

    Great job! I had such a hard time figuring out what to do for this challenge, but you really nailed it.

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  40. Ron Smith
    Oct 01, 2011 @ 10:59:41

    Oooh. Very clever. And great use of oscitate as a one word paragraph.
    Brilliant!

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  41. S P Mount
    Oct 01, 2011 @ 14:32:24

    Enjoyed it, good piece that really reflected the life of a busy wee mammy (I thought I would say that as I see from your blog that you like all things Scottish, you may or may not know, when you read mine: http://spmount.blogspot.com/2011/09/imago-adult-stage.html (No: 178) in case you forgot which one it was, that I am from Glasgow originally). The voice was great almost like a bulleted schedule of a busy family day, no nonsense, just get it on with it kind of deal, and yes, different from the ones I have read thus far. I also like your reference to the kids being beasties, says so much about your happy, but busy, family life. Good job and thanks for commenting on my entry.

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  42. Candy
    Oct 01, 2011 @ 15:13:02

    I can relate to the busy family life, Raelyn! Sometimes my family only wave to each other in passing on the road, always in different directions, work, soccer, meetings…does life ever slow down? Great entry! Thanks for stopping by and reading my stinky flower bit.

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  43. Trisha
    Oct 01, 2011 @ 18:02:58

    Very cool job Raelyn, I too like these ‘real life’ Campaign entries. hehe

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  44. deniz
    Oct 01, 2011 @ 19:20:49

    Oh neat! I hadn’t thought of doing it as a proper blog entry!

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  45. Alison Miller
    Oct 02, 2011 @ 04:27:25

    Awesome entry! I read through it thinking you were going to tell me that you were going to have to delay the post – then I started to recognize those words. Great job!

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  46. cherylreifsnyder
    Oct 02, 2011 @ 09:09:47

    A nonfiction entry–I like it! Clever way to deal with a life-attack :) .

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  47. mish
    Oct 02, 2011 @ 15:38:07

    The words were challenging but you nailed it ! An entertaining dose of reality ! And thanks for stopping by my blog and commenting !

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  48. Mina B.
    Oct 02, 2011 @ 17:21:06

    A very clever take on the challenge. Loved it. Great job.

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  49. Ali Cross
    Oct 02, 2011 @ 20:51:04

    Haha! What a fun take!

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  50. Shannon Lawrence
    Oct 02, 2011 @ 22:08:53

    haha, fun way to do it. You gotta’ do what you gotta’ do! All of us parents have those days, I’m sure. No oscitating from me in the reading.

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  51. Karen
    Oct 03, 2011 @ 17:19:52

    LOL…being a mother of four I could completely relate to your piece!! Great job. :)

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  52. Avery Marsh
    Oct 04, 2011 @ 08:46:07

    Oh, wow. I felt like I was reading my own words, describing just about every day of my week last week. My hubby and I had a synchronicity fail of our own. “Wait… I thought you were picking him up from football practice.” *facepalm*

    Great piece. ;)

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  53. Jocelyn Rish
    Oct 04, 2011 @ 13:57:59

    Hee, love the non-fiction route. Very impressive that you could smoothly work those into “the evening of a very busy mom” tale.

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  54. Stephanie
    Oct 05, 2011 @ 03:58:14

    Great use of the words and a clever entry.

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  55. ♥ LadyJai ♥ (@I_am_LadyJai)
    Oct 06, 2011 @ 09:43:02

    Too funny! Loved how this turned out as a “diary entry” :) So fun to see everyone’s take on the challenge!

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  56. Tia Bach
    Oct 07, 2011 @ 12:47:31

    LOVE the humor and fun! Especially impressed with how seamlessly you used these words in an everyday post. Such a success.

    Thanks, too, for stopping by and commenting on mine. Love this campaign support. (PS I see you are in ROW80. I am, too!)

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  57. MC Rogerson
    Oct 12, 2011 @ 11:02:44

    Enjoyed reading this and loved your approach!

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